COMPLETE: The Lady in Blue by Auguste Groner, translated by Grace Isabel Colborn -jo

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Post by Kitty » June 17th, 2021, 11:56 pm

only one small omission in Chapter 7:

> at 4:29: (p. 96) "Detective ? – Is, is there..." – you forgot to say "Detective" astonished, but it's optional as it doesn't change the text significantly whether she says it or not. I only mention it for completeness' sake.

The rest is perfect as always.

Thank you, and have a nice weekend.

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Post by knotyouraveragejo » June 18th, 2021, 9:45 am

Thanks for catching that, Sonia. I will definitely fix it. :)
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Post by knotyouraveragejo » June 19th, 2021, 9:55 pm

Section 8 is ready for PL and 7 is updated for spot PL.

Hope you are enjoying the weekend. We had to have a plumber out to fix a leaking water heater. :(
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Post by Kitty » June 21st, 2021, 12:26 am

knotyouraveragejo wrote:
June 19th, 2021, 9:55 pm
Section 8 is ready for PL and 7 is updated for spot PL.
Hope you are enjoying the weekend. We had to have a plumber out to fix a leaking water heater. :(
my weekend was quiet. No plumbers needed. I hope all is fixed in your house now.

Chapter 7 is PL ok now.

But there's another small omission in Chapter 8. Astonishingly, it happened at the exact same time stamp than last time :shock: mere coincidence or is there a jump in your program which happens after about 4 and a half minutes of recording ? :hmm:

> at 4:28: (p. 115) "But you will see very soon, said Sennfeld, looking at the old detective" – you forgot "said Sennfeld", which makes the verb sound a bit incomplete if there is no noun accompanying it.

Still interesting...Tony is suspicious, but I go with Mueller, there must be another man involved and maybe she was helping him.

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Post by knotyouraveragejo » June 21st, 2021, 10:17 pm

I think I must be recording (or editing) too late at night...anyway chapter 8 is fixed and uploaded for spot PL. Chapter 9 is recorded will hopefully be up sometime tomorrow. :)
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Post by Kitty » June 22nd, 2021, 12:48 am

knotyouraveragejo wrote:
June 21st, 2021, 10:17 pm
chapter 8 is fixed and uploaded for spot PL.
and Spot PL ok :)

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Post by knotyouraveragejo » June 22nd, 2021, 8:23 pm

Thanks. Chapter 9 uploaded. Hopefully I managed not to leave anything out of this one!!
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Post by Kitty » June 24th, 2021, 5:22 am

ah new clues show up. And yes, another person returning while the woman was dead already, that was my guess too so far

I found two small deviations, both could be optional but sound a little bit odd in context, but I let you decide whether you think it's necessary to change:

> at 8:36: (p. 142) "oh no, she waited for the glass" – you said "she stayed". - a bit more odd than the usual expression

> at 11:31: (p. 144) "nonsense, she replied angrily" – you say "she repeated". Wouldn't matter too much, but this was the first time she said this word, so "repeat" is a bit strange

The rest is flawless :)

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Post by knotyouraveragejo » June 24th, 2021, 9:28 pm

Thanks for the careful PLing, Sonia. Chapter 9 is ready for spot PL.
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Post by Kitty » June 25th, 2021, 12:50 am

knotyouraveragejo wrote:
June 24th, 2021, 9:28 pm
Thanks for the careful PLing, Sonia. Chapter 9 is ready for spot PL.
great editing and PL ok now :) Thanks, and have a nice weekend.

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Post by knotyouraveragejo » June 25th, 2021, 9:28 pm

You too. :)

I've uploaded Chapter 10.
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Post by Kitty » June 28th, 2021, 1:32 am

Chapter 10 perfectly PL ok. The plot thickens, now we know that Elise Lehman returned earlier to the house. I suspect Tony may have been the sister or some other family tie to the murderer...strange that the detective wouldn't think of that possibility.

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Post by knotyouraveragejo » June 28th, 2021, 9:17 am

Thanks. Yes, I'm thinking something along those lines too.
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Post by knotyouraveragejo » June 29th, 2021, 8:34 am

Chapter 11 is ready for PL. Just to let you know, the next chapter won't be ready for a couple of days. Real life stuff to take care of...
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Post by Kitty » June 29th, 2021, 11:56 pm

ah I was wondering when Muller would start for Venice :lol: This guy must be involved somehow. Chapter 11 is also PL ok. :thumbs:

Good luck with your personal stuff...hopefully nothing unpleasant. I'll be hear for when you come back

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