COMPLETE China and the Chinese By Edmond Plauchut-mas
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Chapter 6 is now ready for listening. Thanks.
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Hi Holly,
Chapter 6 is PL Okay.
Thanks,
Lora
Chapter 6 is PL Okay.
Thanks,
Lora
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Hi Holly,
I've marked chapter 7 PL Okay, but you may want to check at 15:27; is the word "tolerant" or "intolerant" in the phrase "...of the Celestial Empire are really less ___ than those of Europe."
Thanks,
Lora
I've marked chapter 7 PL Okay, but you may want to check at 15:27; is the word "tolerant" or "intolerant" in the phrase "...of the Celestial Empire are really less ___ than those of Europe."
Thanks,
Lora
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Thank you. I went back and checked the recording to the text, it is correct. It does say "less intolerant", meaning more tolerant than the Europeans.
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Great--thanks--just wanted to be sure.
Lora
Lora
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Holly-
Chapters 8 and 9 are both marked PL Okay. In chapter 8 at 21:23 you may want to insert the subtitle "A Happy Dream."
Thanks,
Lora
Chapters 8 and 9 are both marked PL Okay. In chapter 8 at 21:23 you may want to insert the subtitle "A Happy Dream."
Thanks,
Lora
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Holly,
Chapter 10 is marked PL Okay. I have two notes for you to consider: At 5:40 the word "raged" should be changed to "waged" in "...a bitter feud was waged as to the way in which..." At 23:52 the word "conversation" should be changed to "conversion" in "It would be wiser to leave their conversion alone."
Thanks,
Lora
Chapter 10 is marked PL Okay. I have two notes for you to consider: At 5:40 the word "raged" should be changed to "waged" in "...a bitter feud was waged as to the way in which..." At 23:52 the word "conversation" should be changed to "conversion" in "It would be wiser to leave their conversion alone."
Thanks,
Lora