[POETRY] At Dawn And Dusk, by Victor J. Daley-lny

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Post by Lmnei » June 22nd, 2021, 9:39 pm

wib66 wrote:
June 22nd, 2021, 2:53 pm
Sections 32 and 67 thanks


https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/atdawnanddusk_32_daley_128kb.mp3
6:37

https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/atdawnanddusk_67_daley_128kb.mp3
8:23

Please could someone PL them for me thanks
Hi Michelle -

Excellent long recordings! One little PL note for each one.

Section 32
6:32 – Missing “This Librivox recording is in the public domain.” After End of Section 32.

Section 67
:31 – take a second out of the pause (the second with the noise) – it is throwing off the rhythm listening to the poem.

Lynda

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Post by Lmnei » June 22nd, 2021, 9:43 pm

Hi there -

Signing up for Sections 11, 27, 28, 29, 53 and 64.

NOTE: Section 51 was already claimed on previous page.

That should get you to full!

Lynda

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Post by jangmoy » June 23rd, 2021, 11:18 am

Hello! :)

Here's for section 39 and 40

https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/atdawnanddusk_39_daley_128kb.mp3 1:05
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/atdawnanddusk_40_daley_128kb.mp3 1:15

Please let me know if I need to make changes. Thank you. :)
Last edited by jangmoy on June 23rd, 2021, 12:18 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Post by wib66 » June 23rd, 2021, 12:05 pm

Lmnei wrote:
June 22nd, 2021, 9:39 pm
wib66 wrote:
June 22nd, 2021, 2:53 pm
Sections 32 and 67 thanks


https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/atdawnanddusk_32_daley_128kb.mp3
6:37

https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/atdawnanddusk_67_daley_128kb.mp3
8:23

Please could someone PL them for me thanks
Hi Michelle -

Excellent long recordings! One little PL note for each one.

Section 32
6:32 – Missing “This Librivox recording is in the public domain.” After End of Section 32.

Section 67
:31 – take a second out of the pause (the second with the noise) – it is throwing off the rhythm listening to the poem.

Lynda
These have now been edited and reuploaded.
New Times
Section 32 is 6:41
Section 67 is 8:21

Thanks

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Post by SonOfTheExiles » June 23rd, 2021, 7:06 pm

mleigh wrote:
June 19th, 2021, 5:34 pm
Here is #9, A-Roving


https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/atdawnanddusk_09_daley_128kb.mp3
2:11

Thanks,

M
Thank you, queued for PL.

Cheers,
Chris
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Post by SonOfTheExiles » June 23rd, 2021, 7:07 pm

Aysh wrote:
June 20th, 2021, 6:01 am
Hi,

Could I please have Section 51?

Thanks
Thank you, signing you up.

Cheers,
Chris
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Post by SonOfTheExiles » June 23rd, 2021, 7:14 pm

"Sorry, my tongue got in the way of my eye-tooth, and I couldn't see what I was saying..."

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Post by SonOfTheExiles » June 23rd, 2021, 7:22 pm

Lmnei wrote:
June 22nd, 2021, 9:43 pm
Hi there -

Signing up for Sections 11, 27, 28, 29, 53 and 64.

NOTE: Section 51 was already claimed on previous page.

That should get you to full!

Lynda
Thank you, signing you up.

Cheers,
Chris
"Sorry, my tongue got in the way of my eye-tooth, and I couldn't see what I was saying..."

Heir At Law It Pays Brewster's Millions Intimate Strangers Captain Jinks Country Mouse A Night Off Mollentrave on Women

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Post by SonOfTheExiles » June 23rd, 2021, 7:23 pm

jangmoy wrote:
June 23rd, 2021, 11:18 am
Hello! :)

Here's for section 39 and 40

https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/atdawnanddusk_39_daley_128kb.mp3 1:05
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/atdawnanddusk_40_daley_128kb.mp3 1:15

Please let me know if I need to make changes. Thank you. :)
Thank you, queued for PL.

Cheers,
Chris
"Sorry, my tongue got in the way of my eye-tooth, and I couldn't see what I was saying..."

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Post by Lmnei » June 24th, 2021, 9:57 am

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These have now been edited and reuploaded.
New Times
Section 32 is 6:41
Section 67 is 8:21

Thanks
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Hi Michelle -

Great edits! These are PL OK now. :)

Lynda

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Post by ABVoice » June 24th, 2021, 2:49 pm

Hi,
Here is the new Section#46:
Duration: 1:29
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/atdawnanddusk_46_daley_128kb.mp3
Thanks

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