[Politcs/Philosophy]Enquiry Concerning Political Justice Vol1-William Godwin-ag

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Post by alg1001 » March 31st, 2020, 7:33 pm

Animadvert. I have a new word! It could be useful.

Section 7 is PL OK, Bill.
Great reading! :D
Thanks!
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Post by alg1001 » March 31st, 2020, 7:59 pm

PL Notes

Sections 1 and 2. Spot PL OK.
Sections 24 and 25 PL OK :thumbs:

Thank you, Gentlemen!

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Post by williamjones » April 1st, 2020, 6:45 am

williamjones wrote:
March 31st, 2020, 7:25 pm
Jddykst wrote:
March 28th, 2020, 10:40 am
Sections 19 and 20 submitted, at 20:43 and 21:09, respectively.

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_20_godwin_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_19_godwin_128kb.mp3

:)

jddykst
PL NOTE Section 20 only

Great job, Jim. It's a pleasure to listen to Godwin's words so carefully brought to life by your sonorous voice.

Only one blip:
20:07 heard: "Such are the general principles of human society"
s/b : "Such are the GENUINE principles of human society"
Bill:
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Post by Jddykst » April 1st, 2020, 5:05 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_19_godwin_128kb.mp3

Section 19 re-submitted/corrected, at 20:07. Sorry about that, I think I need to be a bit more diligent in proofing my stuff, before I submit. There are some terms in this work that I haven't been exposed to, but that's part of the fun. I have tried to speed up the tempo a bit, and finally settled on +3, thanks for the suggestion. I agree, that's an improvement. :thumbs:

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Post by Jddykst » April 1st, 2020, 5:10 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_17_godwin_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_18_godwin_128kb.mp3

Sections 17 and 18 re-submitted/corrected, at 8:30 and 17:22, respectively.

Thanks for the proof :) -

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Post by williamjones » April 1st, 2020, 5:19 pm

Section 26 Of Obedience PL NOTES

Like Kant, Godwin dots every "i" and crosses every "t". He's skating on the edge between thoroughness and pedantry.
You're an excellent reader, Jim, I'm glad you found this project.

again, only one blip:
29:01 Heard "can no otherwise be PERPETRATED,"
s/b "can no otherwise be PERPETUATED,"
Bill:
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Post by williamjones » April 1st, 2020, 5:28 pm

Sections 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 All - PL OK!!
Bill:
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Post by Jddykst » April 2nd, 2020, 1:13 pm

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I have corrected Section 20, at about 20:31, and also revised the tempo, based on your previous excellent suggestion.

Jim D.
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Post by williamjones » April 2nd, 2020, 4:46 pm

Jddykst wrote:
April 2nd, 2020, 1:13 pm
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_20_godwin_128kb.mp3

I have corrected Section 20, at about 20:31, and also revised the tempo, based on your previous excellent suggestion.

Molto Bene! :thumbs:

Jim D.
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Post by Jddykst » April 3rd, 2020, 9:28 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_26_godwin_128kb.mp3

Thanks for the proof, I've corrected and re-submitted Section 26, at 28:42 :)

Jim D.
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Post by williamjones » April 3rd, 2020, 10:56 am

Jddykst wrote:
April 3rd, 2020, 9:28 am
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_26_godwin_128kb.mp3

Thanks for the proof, I've corrected and re-submitted Section 26, at 28:42 :)

Jim D.
Thanks, Jim. 26 is now PL OK.
One last comment on the suggestion that you employ the Change Tempo effect: I had asked my LV Mentor, MsFry about my own recordings and among other suggestions she explained the Tempo thing. She even suggested that I try Tempo +12 in on one section and then +14, etc. It was only at +20 that I obviously had to dial it back. In places where I'm trying to squeeze every bit of juice out of every word I tend to get PONDEROUS to the +12 level. (Just ask my wife!) But, I almost always do a +6 tempo change to my files. That's just the way I talk.

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Post by Jddykst » April 4th, 2020, 8:43 pm

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Section 10 submitted at 16:31, thanks.

You're too generous, but I appreciate the positive feedback. I've been increasing the tempo recently, but not to the extent you suggest. I'll play with it a little more going forward.

Jim D.
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Post by alg1001 » April 5th, 2020, 10:00 am

Thank you for Section 10, Jim!

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Post by williamjones » April 6th, 2020, 9:11 pm

Jddykst wrote:
April 4th, 2020, 8:43 pm
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry_10_godwin_128kb.mp3

Section 10 submitted at 16:31, thanks.

You're too generous, but I appreciate the positive feedback. I've been increasing the tempo recently, but not to the extent you suggest. I'll play with it a little more going forward.

Jim D.
Nicely Done, Jim! PL OK!
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Post by Jddykst » April 11th, 2020, 9:39 am

Jim D.

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