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2:40 - correction/repeat – not long after Anna’s marriage.
3:28 – stumble – ineligible
4:05 – stumble – daughter-in-law
5:57 stumble - that Anna made no attempt to introduce her into her own aristocratic circle.
6:04 stumble - Over and over she bit back the question which would reach her lips,
6:16 - and her husband was taxed to the utmost to subdue and sweeten the tumult of her wounded feeling.
8:39 - He was delicately sympathetic, chivalrously attentive, to her in all outward ways;
9:27 - exercised an influence over her mature life no less mysterious and no less profound.
10:18 - his physical inability to continue in his difficult duties brought Keith and Anna to a sudden course of action.
11:25 The old ground plan of the moral universe with which she had started in life looked now a mean and narrow thing. Larger hopes and a bolder faith awoke in her.
11:59 - as an unwelcome period to their best year of life.
12:06 - with affectionate, albeit restrained, cordiality, and watched Anna
12:50 I have been going back continually in thought to-night to that time.
13:03 - but she has now reached the first and best bloom of her maturity.
13:29 - if she chooses to exert her power.
13:35 - I have about concluded to give a reception next month in honour of your return, if my health permits.”
15:11 - “It has taken her a good while to accept the world’s standards and fit herself to the world’s groove,
18:18 - But even more than before the person of the man seemed to overawe her with a sense of power and command.
18:33 - You must pardon my intruding upon you to-night
19:30 - These words, spoken with the solemnity of a prophetic admonition, pierced Anna’s consciousness.
20:04 - and over again that strange summons and challenge of John Gregory.
21:40 - as he had spoiled, this latest development of life for her,
20:11 - Now the sense of what he had said roused her to burning indignation and protest, and again to contrition.
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