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Post by mightyfelix » January 11th, 2018, 1:25 pm

Craigos wrote:
January 11th, 2018, 1:16 pm
Do you still need a policeman?
Yes, thank you!
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Post by mightyfelix » January 11th, 2018, 1:26 pm

Kitty wrote:
January 11th, 2018, 1:11 pm
mightyfelix wrote:Well done, Sonia! I especially liked your vicious little chuckle when you're contemplating leaving a needle in Constance's knickers! Act 2 is PL ok. I'll get it in the MW when I'm not on my mobile.
thank you, I'll put it in the MW for you, so it won't get lost among the posts. :) I agree, it's difficult to navigate the MW on the mobile.

Sonia
Ha! It never fails! I start patting myself on the back, thinking I've updated all my projects, and then someone reminds me that I missed something! :roll: Thank you!
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Journal of Francis Asbury Traveling preacher, America
The Crook in the Lot Faith in the midst of trials
20th C. Negro Lit. Essays on African American issues
Faces in the Fire Essays on Faith

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Post by Kitty » January 11th, 2018, 1:30 pm

mightyfelix wrote:
January 11th, 2018, 1:26 pm
Ha! It never fails! I start patting myself on the back, thinking I've updated all my projects, and then someone reminds me that I missed something! :roll: Thank you!
well you told me to keep an eye on the project, so that's what I'm doing :) don't worry, and no stress. You're doing fine.

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Post by mightyfelix » January 12th, 2018, 9:56 am

Excellent, Craig! Oh, how I wish you had a bit more! You played him perfectly! Just a well-meaning bloke of a h'officer trying to keep the streets tidy. PL ok!
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Journal of Francis Asbury Traveling preacher, America
The Crook in the Lot Faith in the midst of trials
20th C. Negro Lit. Essays on African American issues
Faces in the Fire Essays on Faith

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Post by Kitty » January 12th, 2018, 10:11 am

mightyfelix wrote:
January 12th, 2018, 9:56 am
Excellent, Craig! Oh, how I wish you had a bit more! You played him perfectly! Just a well-meaning bloke of a h'officer trying to keep the streets tidy. PL ok!
is he the policeman abusing my Susan ? Not so well meaning. I gave him an earful :mrgreen:

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Post by mightyfelix » January 12th, 2018, 10:12 am

Kitty wrote:
January 12th, 2018, 10:11 am
mightyfelix wrote:
January 12th, 2018, 9:56 am
Excellent, Craig! Oh, how I wish you had a bit more! You played him perfectly! Just a well-meaning bloke of a h'officer trying to keep the streets tidy. PL ok!
is he the policeman abusing my Susan ? Not so well meaning. I gave him an earful :mrgreen:

Sonia
Haha you certainly did. Which I think is why he nearly took you in! :lol:
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Journal of Francis Asbury Traveling preacher, America
The Crook in the Lot Faith in the midst of trials
20th C. Negro Lit. Essays on African American issues
Faces in the Fire Essays on Faith

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Post by Kitty » January 13th, 2018, 6:36 pm

here's Susan's big Act :mrgreen: phew, this gal has some anger management problems. But I liked doing the part.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/ifihadafather_susan_3_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 14:57 min.

Hope you like it :)

Sonia

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Post by mightyfelix » January 13th, 2018, 10:57 pm

I did warn you that she had a temper! :lol:

I'll add this to my to-do list for tomorrow. I had a wedding reception and about six-seven hours of driving today (actually, I was a passenger for most of that), and it's midnight here, so I'll get back to you tomorrow afternoon or evening.
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Journal of Francis Asbury Traveling preacher, America
The Crook in the Lot Faith in the midst of trials
20th C. Negro Lit. Essays on African American issues
Faces in the Fire Essays on Faith

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Post by alanmapstone » January 14th, 2018, 4:25 am

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the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose

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Post by mightyfelix » January 14th, 2018, 1:02 pm

James, act 2 and Susan, act 3, both perfect! Nothing missing and it just sounds wonderful! Thank you both!
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The Crook in the Lot Faith in the midst of trials
20th C. Negro Lit. Essays on African American issues
Faces in the Fire Essays on Faith

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Post by Kitty » January 14th, 2018, 1:39 pm

thank you Devorah :9: and here is the final act for Susan. Still a lot to be angry about, but I made her end on a happier note. I got the vibe that she had a bit of a thing for James, so I made her flirt a little bit. Or at least not scowl so much, which is the best Susan can do to be friendly :mrgreen: If you think the last line is out of character, I can still change it. Just let me know.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/ifihadafather_susan_4_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:20 min.

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Post by mightyfelix » January 14th, 2018, 1:50 pm

Kitty wrote:
January 14th, 2018, 1:39 pm
thank you Devorah :9: and here is the final act for Susan. Still a lot to be angry about, but I made her end on a happier note. I got the vibe that she had a bit of a thing for James, so I made her flirt a little bit. Or at least not scowl so much, which is the best Susan can do to be friendly :mrgreen: If you think the last line is out of character, I can still change it. Just let me know.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/ifihadafather_susan_4_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:20 min.

Sonia
Haha, I for one didn't get that vibe! She just finished calling him a sneaky reptile and a putty-lump, if memory serves! But then, nice calves might make up for some of that!! :lol:

I thought the more laughing tone was fine, though. That's a wrap for Susan! :clap:
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Journal of Francis Asbury Traveling preacher, America
The Crook in the Lot Faith in the midst of trials
20th C. Negro Lit. Essays on African American issues
Faces in the Fire Essays on Faith

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Post by Kitty » January 14th, 2018, 2:00 pm

mightyfelix wrote:
January 14th, 2018, 1:50 pm
Haha, I for one didn't get that vibe! She just finished calling him a sneaky reptile and a putty-lump, if memory serves!
:shock: right, I forgot that was James too...oops...but somehow the final sentence gave me that vibe. Also the sentence that James said to her, somehow. Maybe there is a future for them after all. :mrgreen:

Well, if you think it passes, so much the better. It was a challenging role. Looking forward to the outcome.

Sonia

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Post by alanmapstone » January 15th, 2018, 9:42 am

James acts 3 & 4..

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/ifihadafather_james_3.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/ifihadafather_james_4.mp3

Taking note of Sonia's comment about her final line to James I have tried to make his final line a bit less unfriendly.
alan
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