thank you, now really PL ok
Thank you so much for checking all of that! I will try to find some time to record Act III later in the week but may be early nextKitty wrote: ↑May 10th, 2021, 12:30 amYES ! this is perfect, you had all the character names correctly added thank you for making this PL job so much easier and also Todd's editing job. Your level of accuracy is exceptional for such a long act. All PL ok.
Todd: is the Prologue ready for PL ? looks like it, but I will wait for you to get Scott's voice credit inserted, then I'll PL this afternoon. Just let me know when it's ready.
ah well, she will see the error of her ways in the next act They'll make up in the end and all is forgiven.ToddHW wrote:Act 1 Scene 1 is ready for final PL except for a missing Millie line at 48:00 which could be checked later in a Spot PL if you wish.
Act 1 scene 2 is also ready for Final PL.
Mrs Jones sure has been hard on poor old Lightnin!
> at 2:31: (p. 22/23) did you discard this on purpose ? "this is removed for last act and shows the power plant on the drop – this power plant not to be seen in first act." (ok I see why you wouldn't need to include it here – I hope it's mentioned in the third act)Correct; this was a spoiler and in Act 3 the power plant on the scenery is mentioned - so I removed mention of it from Act 1
The correct line was missing from Mrs Harper file, so I just repeated the later quote> at 25:20: (p. 35) "Come, Freeda." – you inserted the next quote "all right, Freeda" here...it should be the quote right before this one
PM'd; message not opened yet. (She hasn't logged on since 2 May.) I looked for another line by her that I could substitute but did not find one.> at 48:00: (p. 48) missed line: "I'll take it up to her" – did you contact Annie ?
Dunno how Lightnin’ made a break … he must be psychic.
oh so I missed it in PL sorry... but yes, it also works here. Unless we get he reader to give us another line. Or is she not around anymore ?ToddHW wrote:The correct line was missing from Mrs Harper file, so I just repeated the later quote
yes this is PL ok nowAct 1 Scene 2 changed as you suggest and uploaded for Spot PL.
Great.AngeliqueAnja wrote: ↑May 12th, 2021, 5:34 pmHere's the missing line for Millie. Sorry it took so long for me to get to. (I hope I managed to recapture her voice!)
ToddHW wrote: ↑May 12th, 2021, 5:46 pmGreat.AngeliqueAnja wrote: ↑May 12th, 2021, 5:34 pmHere's the missing line for Millie. Sorry it took so long for me to get to. (I hope I managed to recapture her voice!)
(I know what you mean about recapturing voice. I recorded a role this morning in my pre-breakfast voice and by after lunch time when I went back to edit it for upload, I couldn't get it back quite properly to make fixes.... But your match sounded fine.)
So, that means Act 1 Scene 1 is now ready for Spot PL.