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Post by mleigh » February 3rd, 2021, 5:22 pm

Here is Mrs Briggs from the Trysting Place.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trystingplace_mrsbriggs_tarkington_128kb.mp3


It ended up being a bigger role than I expected - but she is my kind of character.


Let me know of any issues. (I hope I inserted the lines I missed first time through in the correct locations.)


Thanks,

M

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Post by ToddHW » February 3rd, 2021, 7:13 pm

Thank you.

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Post by UPRG11W » February 4th, 2021, 12:44 am

PL note

Yes, 10:34 total length. I see two spots with a line missing at each spot.

One line missing between the following two spots.
2:40 "... in three days this hand will be given to me for ever.", on page 14 of the book.
2:45 "And you positively refuse to name the person ...", on page 17 of the book.
I believe there should be one line "This way, madam. " between 2:40 and 2:45, on page 17 of the book. 

One line missing between the following two spots.  
4:20 "... possession of that hitherto insensible bosom?"
4:25 "What new alarm? Ha! ..."
I believe there should be one line "Cannot?" between 4:20 and 4:25. All three lines are on page 18 of the book.
Andrewjames wrote:
January 28th, 2021, 12:18 pm
section 40

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/fainthearneverwonfairlady_marquisdesantacruz_planche_128kb.mp3

10min 34 sorry for typo in very long mp3 name

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Post by UPRG11W » February 4th, 2021, 1:25 am

PL note
It is a very beautiful 11:11 recording. I am afraid that I am too strict by expressing the following opinions.

1:34 - 1:36 there should be a 5-second silence, instead of 2 seconds, for the stage direction.
1:34 "I’m sure they heard him in the next suite." (She rises.) 
1:36 "I suppose you’d better go ..."

One line missing between the following two lines.
9:27 "Oh, let’s go!"
9:31 "Oh, mercy!"
There is another "Let’s go! " that should be following 9:27 "Oh, let’s go!", with a 5-second silence before 9:31 "Oh, mercy!"

One repeat line that needs to be removed at 10:09 - 10:10. 
10:05 -10:06 "But I’m not—"
10:09 - 10:10 "But I’m not—"
The expression is beautiful here with the repetition, but I did not see it is repeated in the text.
mleigh wrote:
February 3rd, 2021, 5:22 pm
Here is Mrs Briggs from the Trysting Place.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trystingplace_mrsbriggs_tarkington_128kb.mp3


It ended up being a bigger role than I expected - but she is my kind of character.


Let me know of any issues. (I hope I inserted the lines I missed first time through in the correct locations.)


Thanks,

M

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Post by ToddHW » February 4th, 2021, 5:11 am

UPRG11W wrote:
January 27th, 2021, 8:02 pm
PL note
I would say it's an exemplary 20:59 recording, thanks to Todd. As a new PL-er, I just want to make sure about the two following spots of stage directions.
5:25 - 5:27, 7:58 - 8:00,
I thought there is a 5-second silence for the stage direction, while it seems that the direction was "performed out"

By all means, please mark it as "PL OK" when you want to.

Regards,
Jessie
ToddHW wrote:
January 27th, 2021, 6:09 am
Forgot I had recorded Michael Angelo 3 weeks ago! Finally remembered, edited, and uploaded.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/fix_angelo_hay.mp3

20:59 long

Ready for PL.

Thanks, Todd
If a stage direction is already acted out, then the editor will likely not need to insert the stage direction into the dialog. In this case I will mark it PL OK.

Thanks, Todd

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Post by AngeliqueAnja » February 4th, 2021, 1:29 pm

UPRG11W wrote:
February 3rd, 2021, 10:19 am
PL note
I found two missing lines.

One line missing before 1:17
1:10 "... that damned spot that wouldn't wash out" 
1:17 "Wonderful!". 
There is another line in between, by All, "Amen!"    

One line missing before 3:00.
2:55 "...I could live without my Othello."
3:00 "We agree."
There is another line in between, along with Viola and Lady Macbeth, "Heaven preserve us!"
Here you go! All fixed :D
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/retamingtheshrew_desdemona_postgate.mp3

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Post by ToddHW » February 4th, 2021, 2:34 pm

Thank you - also thanks for all the PLs.

Todd

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Post by mleigh » February 4th, 2021, 5:29 pm

UPRG11W wrote:
February 4th, 2021, 1:25 am
PL note
It is a very beautiful 11:11 recording. I am afraid that I am too strict by expressing the following opinions.

1:34 - 1:36 there should be a 5-second silence, instead of 2 seconds, for the stage direction.
1:34 "I’m sure they heard him in the next suite." (She rises.) 
1:36 "I suppose you’d better go ..."

One line missing between the following two lines.
9:27 "Oh, let’s go!"
9:31 "Oh, mercy!"
There is another "Let’s go! " that should be following 9:27 "Oh, let’s go!", with a 5-second silence before 9:31 "Oh, mercy!"

One repeat line that needs to be removed at 10:09 - 10:10. 
10:05 -10:06 "But I’m not—"
10:09 - 10:10 "But I’m not—"
The expression is beautiful here with the repetition, but I did not see it is repeated in the text.
mleigh wrote:
February 3rd, 2021, 5:22 pm
Here is Mrs Briggs from the Trysting Place.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trystingplace_mrsbriggs_tarkington_128kb.mp3


It ended up being a bigger role than I expected - but she is my kind of character.


Let me know of any issues. (I hope I inserted the lines I missed first time through in the correct locations.)


Thanks,

M
Here is my corrected file.


https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trystingplace_mrsbriggs_tarkington_128kb.mp3

Since I had to go in and edit the file anyway it was easy enough to add a little more
silence.
Added missing line at ~ 9:35
Repeat removed ~ 10:24

Hope all is fine now. Let me know.

Thanks,

M

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Post by ToddHW » February 4th, 2021, 6:22 pm

Thank you.

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Post by silverquill » February 5th, 2021, 7:52 am

~ Larry

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Post by silverquill » February 5th, 2021, 7:57 am

UPRG11W wrote:
February 3rd, 2021, 10:40 am
PL note
Very nice 9:03-long recording, except for one extra that needs to be removed.

3:00 - 3:05 extra line, which is supposed to be for Macbeth, instead.
"Blow wind, come wrack! Now we'll keep the harness on our back."
silverquill wrote:
February 3rd, 2021, 8:52 am
And, here is poor Petruchio:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/shrew_petruchio_postgate.mp3
Aw, shucks, I loved that line. :lol:

Revised file uploaded.
~ Larry

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Post by ToddHW » February 5th, 2021, 9:51 am

Thank you.

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Post by JoannaHoyt » February 5th, 2021, 4:36 pm

May I be Viola in The Re-Taming of the Shrew?

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Post by ToddHW » February 5th, 2021, 4:39 pm

Thank you.

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Post by WiltedScribe » February 7th, 2021, 1:00 am

Here is Angelo:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/retamingoftheshrew_angelo_postgate.mp3

I'd also like to claim the characters in sections 17, 56, 64 and 74.
Tomas Peter

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