FULL[Play] Sunshine by Walter Ben Hare - thw

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Post by Ambsweet13 » January 14th, 2021, 1:30 pm

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Post by jennlea » January 14th, 2021, 2:32 pm

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Post by jennlea » January 14th, 2021, 2:33 pm

AngeliqueAnja wrote:
January 14th, 2021, 12:46 pm

Sure, I would be happy to :D

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Thanks so much Annie! I really appreciate it :D
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Post by jennlea » January 14th, 2021, 8:46 pm

Wonderful job all around Annie! Maudelia is so endearing! Just a couple of lines I need to you add.

Act 2:
3:51- please insert "I want to get some practice, that's why." (pg 46)

Act 3:
4:21- please insert "Because you drank up all your tonic. The Doc says you can't have anything fancy for a week. [Laughs.] That must have been an awfully funny tonic, it made you act so queer." (pg 101, and feel free to add a laugh)
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Post by jennlea » January 14th, 2021, 9:21 pm

adrianstephens wrote:
January 14th, 2021, 2:35 am
Stage Directions, Act 1

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/sunshine_stagedirections_1_128kb.mp3 22:39, of which about 60% is silence
Alternate credits recorded at 16 and 17s.
Fantastic job, Adrian! Act 1 is Perfectly PL-OK!
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Post by jennlea » January 14th, 2021, 10:16 pm

Dtcastid wrote:
January 14th, 2021, 1:18 pm
Hi Jenn,
Here's Miss Gregory, the Nurse, Acts 1, 2, and 3.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/sunshine_missgregory_1_128kb.mp3, which runs at 4:1

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/sunshine_missgregory_2_128kb.mp3, which runs at 3:37

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/sunshine_missgregory_3_128kb.mp3, which runs at 1:51.

Let me know if there's anything you need.
Diane
Lovely job, Diane! You gave Miss Gregory the perfect mix of sternness and compassion!

All 3 Acts are straight PL-OK!
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Post by jennlea » January 14th, 2021, 11:02 pm

Acts 2 and 3 are PL-OK!

Again, great job with Mrs. Whipple! I had to laugh every time you said "Oh, my nerves, my nerves" :lol:
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Post by jennlea » January 14th, 2021, 11:04 pm

Fantastic job, Andrew! Your portrayal of Mr. Butternip had me in stitches at times :lol:

All 3 Acts are straight PL-OK!
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Post by Andrewjames » January 15th, 2021, 3:39 am

jennlea wrote:
January 14th, 2021, 11:04 pm
Fantastic job, Andrew! Your portrayal of Mr. Butternip had me in stitches at times :lol:

All 3 Acts are straight PL-OK!
thanks jenn, glad it was all ok, i enjoyed mr butternip, when id finished i was only disappointed he didnt have more lines! this is an excellent play selection.

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Post by adrianstephens » January 15th, 2021, 11:40 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/sunshine_stagedirections_2_128kb.mp3 21:24
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/sunshine_stagedirections_3_128kb.mp3 13:52

At the end of Act 3, I added "End of Sunshine by ..." at 13:45, as I've seen in some other projects. Feel free to discard if that's not what you wanted.
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Post by jennlea » January 15th, 2021, 2:41 pm

Thank you, Adrian!
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Post by AngeliqueAnja » January 15th, 2021, 4:53 pm

jennlea wrote:
January 14th, 2021, 8:46 pm
Wonderful job all around Annie! Maudelia is so endearing! Just a couple of lines I need to you add.

Act 2:
3:51- please insert "I want to get some practice, that's why." (pg 46)

Act 3:
4:21- please insert "Because you drank up all your tonic. The Doc says you can't have anything fancy for a week. [Laughs.] That must have been an awfully funny tonic, it made you act so queer." (pg 101, and feel free to add a laugh)
There you go! All fixed up! :clap:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/sunshine_maudelia_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/sunshine_maudelia_3_128kb.mp3

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Post by jennlea » January 16th, 2021, 8:13 am

Thanks, Annie!
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Post by jennlea » January 17th, 2021, 6:43 am

adrianstephens wrote:
January 15th, 2021, 11:40 am
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/sunshine_stagedirections_2_128kb.mp3 21:24
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/sunshine_stagedirections_3_128kb.mp3 13:52

At the end of Act 3, I added "End of Sunshine by ..." at 13:45, as I've seen in some other projects. Feel free to discard if that's not what you wanted.
Excellent job, Adrian! Stage directions for Acts 2 and 3 are PL-OK! Thank you for your wonderful work on them :clap:
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