Hi, NoelVox,
Thank you very much.
Here are my PL notes- They are just some easy fixes.
~ 9:57 the word "it" in brackets seems to go unheard : "...for no one would suspect (it) to see..."
~ 10:05 part of the sentence (in brackets) is missing. "... a more contemptible-looking creature than you (are as you sit there with that Dolly pinafore upon you). He coloured up at that..."
~ 10:13 the recording says "said he, and slipped it off.", while the text goes "said he, and he slipped it off."
~ 12:18 there is a rise in volume in "said he". I mention it but I'm not sure whether it matters or not.
~ 15:07 the bit "we got" is repeated.
Regards,
Jasna