FULL (play) Hay Fever by Noel Coward - thw

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WendyKatzHiller
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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 23rd, 2021, 1:37 pm

MManolakes wrote:
February 16th, 2021, 5:05 pm
Richard Greatham, Act 2, duration 6:18

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_richardgreatham_2_128kb.mp3

Mike
Excellent! The perfect diplomatist. :) I particularly like the "with a slight laugh" lines.

PL OK
Wendy

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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 23rd, 2021, 1:51 pm

MManolakes wrote:
February 21st, 2021, 4:49 pm
Richard Greatham, Act 3, duration 4:05

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_richardgreatham_3_128kb.mp3

Mike
Another lovely job! Only one small correction:

~ 3:09 missing line "I don't think so."

Thanks so much for your excellent work!

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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 23rd, 2021, 2:58 pm

Tchaikovsky wrote:
February 23rd, 2021, 9:35 am
Here you are Mother... the corrections for Simon Act Two. Passed in Checker.

Tchaikovsky

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act2_128kb.mp3 duration 6:12
Delightful! No one says "winsomely" better. :D

Just one small addition:

You're missing your first line (~13) "Who'll go out?"

Otherwise, perfect.
Thanks,
Wendy

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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 23rd, 2021, 3:05 pm

Tchaikovsky wrote:
February 23rd, 2021, 9:48 am
And Here are the corrections for Simon Act Three. Passed through Checker. This was so much fun to do. I didn't realize how much I would enjoy behaving like an UTTER TWIT.

Tchaikovsky

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act3_128kb.mp3 duration 6:12
Utter twits and murderers are always the most fun to play!

PL OK

Thanks,
Wendy

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Post by MManolakes » February 23rd, 2021, 4:06 pm


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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 23rd, 2021, 4:08 pm

Thanks,
Wendy

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Post by Tchaikovsky » February 24th, 2021, 9:55 am

Hi Wendy,
I cannot believe that I missed that line a second time. Here is the final Act two correction for the Utter Twit (meaning me)

Tchaikovsky

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act2_128kb.mp3 (6:14)

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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 24th, 2021, 10:16 am

Thanks! P.S. Mother would never call you an utter twit. :)

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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 24th, 2021, 12:50 pm

Tchaikovsky wrote:
February 24th, 2021, 9:55 am
Hi Wendy,
I cannot believe that I missed that line a second time. Here is the final Act two correction for the Utter Twit (meaning me)

Tchaikovsky

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_simon_act2_128kb.mp3 (6:14)
Perfect now. PL OK :clap:

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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 24th, 2021, 12:54 pm

MManolakes wrote:
February 23rd, 2021, 4:06 pm
Richard corrected, Act 3, duration 4:12

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_richardgreatham_3_128kb.mp3

Mike
All set now. Great job! :clap:

PL OK

Thanks,
Wendy


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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 24th, 2021, 3:11 pm

Woot! Thanks so much! :clap:

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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 25th, 2021, 9:05 am

Fabulous characterization of Myra; snotty to Judith, sexy to David, and particularly fun when angry toward the end of Act 2. Brava!

Act 1 PL OK.

Please add role and name to the start of the other acts (you don't need to say which act it is).

Also, in Act 2, just two tiny changes:
~52 missing word "I SHOULD think rudely. . . "
~3:13 "It must be. . . " (not "have been")

Again, great work!

Thanks,
Wendy

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Post by jvisi » February 25th, 2021, 1:03 pm

jvisi wrote:
February 21st, 2021, 2:50 pm
Hi Wendy,
I would be interested in taking Jackie if it's needed. You can list me as jvisi. Thanks!

Jvisi
Hello,
Jackie Coryton is ready for review. All files were run through the checker.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_jackiecoryton_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_jackiecoryton_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/hayfever_jackiecoryton_3.mp3

Act 1 recording is 3:27
Act 2 recording is 1:31
Act 3 recording is 4:27

Thank you!

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Post by WendyKatzHiller » February 25th, 2021, 1:04 pm

Thanks so much! Can't wait to hear them.
Wendy

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