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Post by chulsky » January 11th, 2021, 5:59 pm

Excellent patching, Sofia and Wolfgang! :clap: Thank you!
Sec.1 and 6 PL OK :thumbs:
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Post by chulsky » January 16th, 2021, 1:04 pm

becevka wrote:
January 10th, 2021, 12:06 pm
Section 15
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_15_tolstoy_128kb.mp3 with length 07:19
Dear Wolfgang,
It was a pleasure to listen, thank you!
There are a few stresses that could be fixed if you wish, but please, do make it right @4:18. The others -- up to you :)
@1:13 - "дремOтoй", I hear "дремотОй"
@4:18 - "пОлно", I hear "пoлнO". Here the stress changes the meaning; "пОлно" means "enough, don't talk about it"
@5:45 -- "ФарфOровую", I hear "ФAрфоровую"
@5:50 - "пухОвой", I hear "пУховой"
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Post by HannaPonomarenko » January 16th, 2021, 2:39 pm

My English is not good enough to express how grateful I am to have such a ответственного и грамотного DPL. Большое спасибо, Марк!

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Post by MariaMironova » January 20th, 2021, 7:51 pm

Добрый день! Я бы хотела прочитать 8-ю, 9-ю, 10-ю и 11-ю часть. Спасибо!

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Post by HannaPonomarenko » January 21st, 2021, 8:03 am

MariaMironova wrote:
January 20th, 2021, 7:51 pm
Добрый день! Я бы хотела прочитать 8-ю, 9-ю, 10-ю и 11-ю часть. Спасибо!
Добрый день, Мария! Отмечу в заметках Вашу заявку до тех пор, пока Вам не одобрят 1-minute test.
Спасибо :)

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Post by victorseremet » January 23rd, 2021, 2:24 am

Hello Mark,

Here is Chapter 5 for PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_05_tolstoy_128kb.mp3
Duration: 11:36
Any constuctive criticism is welcome.

Thank you
Victor

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Post by HannaPonomarenko » January 23rd, 2021, 3:12 am

victorseremet wrote:
January 23rd, 2021, 2:24 am
Hello Mark,

Here is Chapter 5 for PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_05_tolstoy_128kb.mp3
Duration: 11:36
Any constuctive criticism is welcome.

Thank you
Victor
Thank you!

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Post by becevka » January 23rd, 2021, 6:43 pm

chulsky wrote:
January 16th, 2021, 1:04 pm
becevka wrote:
January 10th, 2021, 12:06 pm
Section 15
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_15_tolstoy_128kb.mp3 with length 07:19
Dear Wolfgang,
It was a pleasure to listen, thank you!
There are a few stresses that could be fixed if you wish, but please, do make it right @4:18. The others -- up to you :)
@1:13 - "дремOтoй", I hear "дремотОй"
@4:18 - "пОлно", I hear "пoлнO". Here the stress changes the meaning; "пОлно" means "enough, don't talk about it"
@5:45 -- "ФарфOровую", I hear "ФAрфоровую"
@5:50 - "пухОвой", I hear "пУховой"
Hello Mark,
Many thanks for the notes, I have reuploaded the corrected audio https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_15_tolstoy_128kb.mp3 it is still 07:19 in duration.
I have attempted to correct them all.
Please let me know if I need to correct anything else.
Thanks.
Wolfgang Bas

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Post by HannaPonomarenko » January 24th, 2021, 7:13 am

Thank you!

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Post by chulsky » January 24th, 2021, 6:38 pm

becevka wrote:
January 23rd, 2021, 6:43 pm
...I have reuploaded the corrected audio https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_15_tolstoy_128kb.mp3 it is still 07:19 in duration.
...
Thank you very much, Wolfgang! Excellent patching!
Sec.15 PL OK :thumbs:
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Post by DomDom » January 27th, 2021, 10:00 am

Hello Hanna and Chulsky

Here is the 17th chapter. I hope it's ok. I know I have several stress problems even if I checked them all. When I read I tend to change some of them. I hope it's good enough for you.
Tell me if it's not. I will understand.
I had fun doing it. ;o)

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_17_tolstoy_128kb.mp3

Duration : 11 min 16 sec

Have a nice evening.

Dominique

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Post by HannaPonomarenko » January 27th, 2021, 11:34 am

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DomDom wrote:
January 27th, 2021, 10:00 am
Hello Hanna and Chulsky

Here is the 17th chapter. I hope it's ok.
It's wonderful, Dominique! I've listened briefly.
I had fun doing it. ;o)
That is the most important thing :D

Please feel free to claim any other free chapter.

Thank you :D

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Post by chulsky » January 30th, 2021, 9:58 am

victorseremet wrote:
January 23rd, 2021, 2:24 am
Here is Chapter 5 for PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_05_tolstoy_128kb.mp3
Duration: 11:36
Any constructive criticism is welcome.
Hello, Victor. Again, excellent reading, just a few little notes:
1:35 -- "безпрестанно", I hear "безпрестPанно" (modern spelling "беспрестанно," means "non-stop")
5:25 -- again, "безпрестанно", I hear "безпрестPанно" (you did it right at 10:45!)
7:25 -- stress: "травИть", I hear "трAвить"
7:30 -- I would add here "сноска ... Такъ онъ безразлично называлъ всѣхъ мужчинъ ... конец сноски," but let Anya express her opinion :-)
7:50 -- "хотѣлъ," I hear "хотѣлъ бы"
Thank you!
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Post by chulsky » January 30th, 2021, 1:24 pm

DomDom wrote:
January 27th, 2021, 10:00 am
Here is the 17th chapter. I hope it's ok. I know I have several stress problems even if I checked them all. When I read I tend to change some of them. I hope it's good enough for you.
Tell me if it's not. I will understand.
I had fun doing it. ;o)
Thank you, Dominique, very good, clear reading. I could hear you had fun doing it. :)
The couple of "stress problems" are slight, not worth fixing. However a few words are not in the form they are written:
2:12 -- "оглядывалась," I hear "оглядывать"
2:40 -- "разсказъ," I hear "разсказать"
9:14 -- "красавцемъ," I hear "красавец"
9:25 -- 2 sec. pause is confusing, in this context 0.5 sec is enough.

Hope to hear your voice in other chapters too :-)
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Post by HannaPonomarenko » January 30th, 2021, 5:14 pm

chulsky wrote:
January 30th, 2021, 9:58 am

7:30 -- I would add here "сноска ... Такъ онъ безразлично называлъ всѣхъ мужчинъ ... конец сноски," but let Anya express her opinion :-)
I'm in favor to let the reader to decide on footnotes question (to read or not to read). Since the general meaning of the word большак is "the host" http://gramota.ru/slovari/dic/?word=%D0%B1%D0%BE%D0%BB%D1%8C%D1%88%D0%B0%D0%BA&all=x
reading without the footnote also makes sence, so let's leave it as Victor read.

Thank you, Mark)
Btw, I only heard this word in last name Большакова of some acquaintance of mine before)

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