(grp) A Woman and the War by Francis Greville - lny

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Post by squishypotatoes » January 22nd, 2021, 5:32 pm

Hi, I would like to work on Chapter 23: How I would work for peace

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Post by miss stav » January 22nd, 2021, 5:38 pm

Welcome aboard. All yours, have fun.
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Post by johnb2 » January 22nd, 2021, 7:18 pm

Hi Stav, Long tme.....

chapters 19 and 24 please

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Post by miss stav » January 23rd, 2021, 1:06 am

Hi John, how are you? Glad to see you here. 19 and 24 are all yours.
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Post by johnb2 » January 23rd, 2021, 1:30 pm


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Post by miss stav » January 23rd, 2021, 1:35 pm

Hi Jon, thanks a lot. Would you like to take the last unclaimed chapter which is chapter 22? It is not long.
Stav.
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Post by johnb2 » January 23rd, 2021, 1:42 pm

Stav


That's fine. I am your guy.

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Post by miss stav » January 23rd, 2021, 1:45 pm

Wow. You made my day (smile). Thank you.
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Post by ashleighjane » January 23rd, 2021, 1:54 pm

Chapter 19 is PL OK :D

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Post by linny » January 23rd, 2021, 2:28 pm

Off to 'readers found'. :)

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Post by bettenzoli » January 24th, 2021, 10:16 am

Dear Stav,
sorry to be little late but it was my first time with a long text in English so I had to check many pronunciations and it has been taking me time.
https://librivox.org/uploads/linny/womanandthewar_01_greville_128kb.mp3

25 m 5 s

hope it's acceptable (checked has given me "passed").

please let me know.
Eleonora

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Post by miss stav » January 24th, 2021, 10:18 am

You are amazing. An example of hard work and dignity. Thanks a lot.
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Post by jenno » January 25th, 2021, 2:59 pm


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Post by miss stav » January 25th, 2021, 3:01 pm

Amazing. Thanks a lot.
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Post by ashleighjane » January 25th, 2021, 3:50 pm

Chapter 1 PL notes:

Hi Eleonora, this was very well read but there are a few things that should be edited.

0:27 After saying 'chapter 1' please add in the chapter of the title, KING EDWARD AND THE KAISER

3:56 The gap between 'went' and 'so far' could be shortened a little

4:28 - 4:31 The silence is a little long here. I would remove one second of it or else listeners may think the recording stopped playing

5:08 You may like to rerecord the line 'it is impossible to say the same of the court at Berlin' as i heard it is impossible to say the same for the court of at berlin'

7:16 There is some noise here which could be cut out

8:28 - 8:30 The same noise as above. i think it might be cables being knocked.

16:18 - 16:25 The silence here should be shortened

25:04 At the end we usually just say 'end of chapter 1'. The name of the chapter doesn't need to be here

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