[COMPLETE] The Story of Japan by Robert Van Bergen - availle

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WanderingWalker
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Post by WanderingWalker » January 6th, 2021, 5:33 pm

Are section 25 and 26 PL ok?
WW

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Post by Kazbek » January 6th, 2021, 6:21 pm

WanderingWalker wrote:
January 6th, 2021, 5:33 pm
Are section 25 and 26 PL ok?
WW
I was going to let you work through the issues identified in section 27 and then give you time to address similar issues in these two sections before listening to them. Would it help if I listened to them now?

Michael

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Post by WanderingWalker » January 6th, 2021, 6:25 pm

Its fine ill edit section 27 in the day and then post it when completed :)
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Post by audwon » January 6th, 2021, 8:28 pm

Michael:
I was so thrilled that Section 30 PL oked :D. Frankly I was getting a little frustrated earlier.

Uploaded section 28 and 29 . Will wait for your feedback. Thanks.

28 - 12:30
29 - 6:53

https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_28_vanbergen_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_29_vanbergen_128kb.mp3

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Post by Kazbek » January 7th, 2021, 8:42 am

audwon wrote:
January 6th, 2021, 8:28 pm
Michael:
I was so thrilled that Section 30 PL oked :D. Frankly I was getting a little frustrated earlier.
I recall that I also had some frustrating technical issues when I was starting here and almost gave up. I'm glad that I didn't. :)
28 - 12:30
29 - 6:53
Both are PL OK! The length here are reversed, but I fixed that.

Thanks!
Michael

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Post by Kazbek » January 7th, 2021, 8:43 am

Thank you, Rita!

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Post by audwon » January 7th, 2021, 10:45 am

Thanks, Michael!

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Post by WanderingWalker » January 8th, 2021, 2:04 pm


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Post by Kazbek » January 8th, 2021, 7:48 pm

WanderingWalker wrote:
January 8th, 2021, 2:04 pm
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_27_vanbergen_128kb.mp3
Hope section 27 pl ok now
15.25
Thank you! I'm glad you got your editing questions answered. Will PL tomorrow.

Michael

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Post by Kazbek » January 9th, 2021, 7:32 am

Could you delete the repetition of "section 19" after the disclaimer (0:22)? It's not part of this project's intro format. I just realized that I missed this issue in your other two sections, but you don't need to change those. It's not important enough to un-OK a section.

Thanks!
Michael

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Post by Kazbek » January 9th, 2021, 8:56 am

WanderingWalker wrote:
January 8th, 2021, 2:04 pm
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_27_vanbergen_128kb.mp3
Hope section 27 pl ok now
15.25
The first half of this section, which I had PLed, is fine, but starting the second half I found several issues within the space of a minute:

(7:12) p. 186 missing words "however, he"
(7:18) large volume drop
(7:18) several words missing "Both... and when"
(8:03) repeat: "government"
(8:06) editing cue left in

Please understand that we expect readers to check their recording and fix any such issues that they find before the file is uploaded for the first time. PLing is a double-check, not the first check. It's rare that the PL finds more than a couple of these even in a longer recording. Please let me know when you've done that and I'll PL the rest of the section.

Thanks,
Michael

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Post by WanderingWalker » January 9th, 2021, 11:57 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_27_vanbergen_128kb.mp3
15.28
made the edits requested and sorted the volume and hope this is pl ok now :)
Thank you so much for the advice and pointers given so far i really appreciate it
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Post by Kazbek » January 9th, 2021, 12:21 pm

WanderingWalker wrote:
January 9th, 2021, 11:57 am
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/storyjapan_27_vanbergen_128kb.mp3
15.28
made the edits requested and sorted the volume and hope this is pl ok now :)
Thank you so much for the advice and pointers given so far i really appreciate it
WanderwingWalker
Thank you. I'm glad to help. Before I PL it, I'd like to verify one question, because it wasn't clear from your message: have you checked the remainder of this section yourself (now or earlier) for repetitions, missing words and other issues of the kind that I've asked you to fix so far? I want to make sure I've been able to communicate our expected process.

Michael

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Post by WanderingWalker » January 9th, 2021, 1:32 pm

Yes done the edits listed from listening to it so far

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