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Post by Kalamareader » February 6th, 2021, 12:41 pm

johnb2 wrote:
February 6th, 2021, 12:28 pm
hi Stav

is it ok for me to record chapter 18. I await your response.
John,

The MW shows you up for chapter 18.

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Post by johnb2 » February 6th, 2021, 2:30 pm


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Post by Kalamareader » February 6th, 2021, 3:11 pm

johnb2 wrote:
February 6th, 2021, 2:30 pm
Hi Stav and Wayne

Chapter 18 @ 16:56 Ready for PL

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_19_blazedebury_128kb.mp3
Well, John,

Great reading overall.

However, one kind of major error and three kind of minor ones. I will start with the big one. You uploaded chapter 18 as chapter 19 (see above). :lol:

Here are the other ones:

2:19 suffice it to say that in their frenzied revolt against the uncongeniality of their surroundings, You missed the word “in”.

15:08 Look at all that we have already achieved: You missed the word “already”.

15:58 his deep love for self-isolation, You said 'of'. It is a subtle difference. I will leave it up to you.

I will put Chapter 18 as See PL Notes so Stav is aware you did it, but be sure to change name when you re-upload it.

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Post by miss stav » February 6th, 2021, 5:24 pm

Thank you both. John, if you want to read more sections, just let me know.
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Post by johnb2 » February 6th, 2021, 5:56 pm

Hi Wayne and Stav

Chapter 18 @16:56 Ready for Spot PL. (I appreciate your thoroughness Wayne) Thanks

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_18_blazedebury_128kb.mp3

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Post by Kalamareader » February 6th, 2021, 9:22 pm

johnb2 wrote:
February 6th, 2021, 5:56 pm
Hi Wayne and Stav

Chapter 18 @16:56 Ready for Spot PL. (I appreciate your thoroughness Wayne) Thanks

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_18_blazedebury_128kb.mp3
John,

Corrections were absolutely seamless. Great Job!!

Chapter 18 is PLOK :thumbs:

Wayne

P.S. Broadcaster, eh? I can hear it in the voice. :D
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Post by GJConover » February 8th, 2021, 6:16 pm

fixed file name: Chapter 02; no other changes

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Post by Kalamareader » February 9th, 2021, 4:40 pm

GJConover wrote:
February 8th, 2021, 6:16 pm
fixed file name: Chapter 02; no other changes

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_02_blazedebury_128kb.mp3

GJConover
Thanks for all your hard work. Chapter 2 is now PLOK :thumbs:

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Post by GJConover » February 12th, 2021, 8:44 am

Chapter 03 is re-submitted:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_03_blazedebury_128kb.mp3 new timing is 25:48

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Post by GJConover » February 12th, 2021, 9:28 am

Chapter 04 is re-submitted:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_04_blazedebury_128kb.mp3 new timing: 17:42

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Post by Kalamareader » February 12th, 2021, 11:33 am

GJConover wrote:
February 12th, 2021, 8:44 am
Chapter 03 is re-submitted:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_03_blazedebury_128kb.mp3 new timing is 25:48

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Gary,

Good job on your editing. It is now PLOK :thumbs:

One thing, though. When you cut down on the volume, you went down almost 6dB to 86.9. That is on the very low range of LV standards (86-92, goal 89) but just fine. Something, maybe, to work on in future.

Wayne
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Post by Kalamareader » February 12th, 2021, 12:01 pm

GJConover wrote:
February 12th, 2021, 9:28 am
Chapter 04 is re-submitted:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_04_blazedebury_128kb.mp3 new timing: 17:42

GJConover
Gary,

You have done a lot of work recently. Thanks for the efforts.

A couple of comments.

14:58: when doubled up on the back seat of a victoria When you re-read that sentence, you forgot the word seat. I really debated, but it does really make the sentence clearer. They are on the back seat not the back of the vehicle.

Also, this one is a little on the low side. It is down to 86.5, about 6 lower than before. Since you are going to be in it anyway, you might see what you can do. Have you had the chance to download MP3Gain
(http://mp3gain.sourceforge.net/) or Checker (https://wiki.librivox.org/index.php?title=Checker) yet? They are two very useful additions to a(n) LV reader's quiver.

Thanks,

Wayne
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Post by GJConover » February 13th, 2021, 9:09 am

Chapter 05 is re-submitted:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_05_blazedebury_128kb.mp3 revised timing: 15:34

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Post by Kalamareader » February 13th, 2021, 11:20 am

GJConover wrote:
February 13th, 2021, 9:09 am
Chapter 05 is re-submitted:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_05_blazedebury_128kb.mp3 revised timing: 15:34

GJConover
Gary,

Very well done. Your correction is completely seamless. Chapter 5 is PLOK :thumbs:

The correction on the volume was well within LV range, but was still on the low end of it at 87.1. Have you downloaded MP3Gain (mp3gain.sourceforge.net)? This can really help you get it close to 89. :D

Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to the rest of your sections.

Wayne
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