COMPLETE The Storm Of London by Fernande Blaze de Bury - rap

Kalamareader · Post by **Kalamareader** » February 6th, 2021, 12:41 pm

johnb2 wrote: ↑
February 6th, 2021, 12:28 pm
hi Stav

is it ok for me to record chapter 18. I await your response.

John,

The MW shows you up for chapter 18.

Wayne

johnb2 · Post by **johnb2** » February 6th, 2021, 2:30 pm

Hi Stav and Wayne

Chapter 18 @ 16:56 Ready for PL

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_19_blazedebury_128kb.mp3

Kalamareader · Post by **Kalamareader** » February 6th, 2021, 3:11 pm

johnb2 wrote: ↑
February 6th, 2021, 2:30 pm
Hi Stav and Wayne

Chapter 18 @ 16:56 Ready for PL

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_19_blazedebury_128kb.mp3

Well, John,

Great reading overall.

However, one kind of major error and three kind of minor ones. I will start with the big one. You uploaded chapter 18 as chapter 19 (see above).

Here are the other ones:

2:19 suffice it to say that in their frenzied revolt against the uncongeniality of their surroundings, You missed the word “in”.

15:08 Look at all that we have already achieved: You missed the word “already”.

15:58 his deep love for self-isolation, You said 'of'. It is a subtle difference. I will leave it up to you.

I will put Chapter 18 as See PL Notes so Stav is aware you did it, but be sure to change name when you re-upload it.

Wayne

miss stav · Post by **miss stav** » February 6th, 2021, 5:24 pm

Thank you both. John, if you want to read more sections, just let me know.

johnb2 · Post by **johnb2** » February 6th, 2021, 5:56 pm

Hi Wayne and Stav

Chapter 18 @16:56 Ready for Spot PL. (I appreciate your thoroughness Wayne) Thanks

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_18_blazedebury_128kb.mp3

Kalamareader · Post by **Kalamareader** » February 6th, 2021, 9:22 pm

johnb2 wrote: ↑
February 6th, 2021, 5:56 pm
Hi Wayne and Stav

Chapter 18 @16:56 Ready for Spot PL. (I appreciate your thoroughness Wayne) Thanks

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_18_blazedebury_128kb.mp3

John,

Corrections were absolutely seamless. Great Job!!

Chapter 18 is PLOK

Wayne

P.S. Broadcaster, eh? I can hear it in the voice.

GJConover · Post by **GJConover** » February 7th, 2021, 1:39 pm

Chapter 02 is redone:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_02_debury_128kb.mp3 25:36

GJConover

GJConover · Post by **GJConover** » February 8th, 2021, 6:16 pm

fixed file name: Chapter 02; no other changes

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_02_blazedebury_128kb.mp3

GJConover

Kalamareader · Post by **Kalamareader** » February 9th, 2021, 4:40 pm

GJConover wrote: ↑
February 8th, 2021, 6:16 pm
fixed file name: Chapter 02; no other changes

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_02_blazedebury_128kb.mp3

GJConover

Thanks for all your hard work. Chapter 2 is now PLOK

Wayne

GJConover · Post by **GJConover** » February 12th, 2021, 8:44 am

Chapter 03 is re-submitted:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_03_blazedebury_128kb.mp3 new timing is 25:48

GJConover

GJConover · Post by **GJConover** » February 12th, 2021, 9:28 am

Chapter 04 is re-submitted:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_04_blazedebury_128kb.mp3 new timing: 17:42

GJConover

Kalamareader · Post by **Kalamareader** » February 12th, 2021, 11:33 am

GJConover wrote: ↑
February 12th, 2021, 8:44 am
Chapter 03 is re-submitted:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_03_blazedebury_128kb.mp3 new timing is 25:48

GJConover

Gary,

Good job on your editing. It is now PLOK

One thing, though. When you cut down on the volume, you went down almost 6dB to 86.9. That is on the very low range of LV standards (86-92, goal 89) but just fine. Something, maybe, to work on in future.

Wayne

Kalamareader · Post by **Kalamareader** » February 12th, 2021, 12:01 pm

GJConover wrote: ↑
February 12th, 2021, 9:28 am
Chapter 04 is re-submitted:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_04_blazedebury_128kb.mp3 new timing: 17:42

GJConover

Gary,

You have done a lot of work recently. Thanks for the efforts.

A couple of comments.

14:58: when doubled up on the back seat of a victoria When you re-read that sentence, you forgot the word seat. I really debated, but it does really make the sentence clearer. They are on the back seat not the back of the vehicle.

Also, this one is a little on the low side. It is down to 86.5, about 6 lower than before. Since you are going to be in it anyway, you might see what you can do. Have you had the chance to download MP3Gain
(http://mp3gain.sourceforge.net/) or Checker (https://wiki.librivox.org/index.php?title=Checker) yet? They are two very useful additions to a(n) LV reader's quiver.

Thanks,

Wayne

GJConover · Post by **GJConover** » February 13th, 2021, 9:09 am

Chapter 05 is re-submitted:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_05_blazedebury_128kb.mp3 revised timing: 15:34

GJConover

Kalamareader · Post by **Kalamareader** » February 13th, 2021, 11:20 am

GJConover wrote: ↑
February 13th, 2021, 9:09 am
Chapter 05 is re-submitted:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_05_blazedebury_128kb.mp3 revised timing: 15:34

GJConover

Gary,

Very well done. Your correction is completely seamless. Chapter 5 is PLOK

The correction on the volume was well within LV range, but was still on the low end of it at 87.1. Have you downloaded MP3Gain (mp3gain.sourceforge.net)? This can really help you get it close to 89.

Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to the rest of your sections.

Wayne