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Post by ELDN » January 18th, 2021, 8:04 pm

I have PLed chapter 4 and you did a great job.

There are a couple revisions to make:

Chapter 4

1:26 -> "I think we may not doubt it."
he is said instead of we

6:04 -> "any other party in the healing business."
this is said instead of the

That is all,
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Post by ELDN » January 18th, 2021, 8:25 pm

I have also PLed chapter 5.

The following are my notes:

Chapter 5

1:55 -> "Whoever disputes a single one"
whosoever is said instead of whoever

4:25 -> "The 2000 East Indian sects,"
Asian is said instead of Indian

7:49 -> "I think he is more picturesquely insane than"
The word picturesquely is pronounced incorrectly. You pronounce a variant of the word correctly at 8:25.

Expecting your excellent corrections,
ELDN

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Post by johng » January 19th, 2021, 7:32 am

04 and 05 have been corrected
"Morality" is doing what's right regardless of what you're told!
"Obedience" is doing what is told, regardless of what is right!

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Post by johng » January 23rd, 2021, 9:01 am

sections 11-15 are done
"Morality" is doing what's right regardless of what you're told!
"Obedience" is doing what is told, regardless of what is right!

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Post by ELDN » January 28th, 2021, 12:18 pm

I'll do some PLing this weekend and try to keep up with your prolificness.

:mrgreen:
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Post by johng » January 28th, 2021, 12:20 pm

ELDN wrote:
January 28th, 2021, 12:18 pm
I'll do some PLing this weekend and try to keep up with your prolificness.

:mrgreen:
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:-)
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"Morality" is doing what's right regardless of what you're told!
"Obedience" is doing what is told, regardless of what is right!

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Post by johng » January 29th, 2021, 12:19 pm

16 is done.
Note: I've had to split Chapter VII in two since it's so HUGE!!!!
"Morality" is doing what's right regardless of what you're told!
"Obedience" is doing what is told, regardless of what is right!

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Post by ELDN » January 30th, 2021, 6:41 pm

Spot PL of chapter 4 OK!

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Post by ELDN » January 30th, 2021, 6:48 pm

I have spot PLed chapter 5 and it is OK.

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Post by ELDN » January 30th, 2021, 7:41 pm

A 30 minute chapter and only about 3 mistakes, well done!

Here are my PL notes for chapter 6:

Chapter 6

12:53 -> "that flesh is heir to'; that those he"
and is said instead of that

22:28 -> "a train of thought as I had never"
the word as is dropped from the sentence

23:08 -> "all the books to one side, except the Annex."
there's a phone notification here that should probably be deleted

Once again, good job,
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Post by johng » January 31st, 2021, 11:25 am

ELDN wrote:
January 30th, 2021, 7:41 pm
A 30 minute chapter and only about 3 mistakes, well done!

Here are my PL notes for chapter 6:

Chapter 6

12:53 -> "that flesh is heir to'; that those he"
and is said instead of that

22:28 -> "a train of thought as I had never"
the word as is dropped from the sentence

23:08 -> "all the books to one side, except the Annex."
there's a phone notification here that should probably be deleted

Once again, good job,
ELDN
Thanks ELDN!!!
06 is corrected! (GOOD EARS at 23:08...I had to listen to it with the volume all the way up to catch it!!
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Post by ELDN » January 31st, 2021, 6:20 pm

Chapter 6 OK!

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Post by ELDN » January 31st, 2021, 7:15 pm

Another good job with Chapter 7!

Here are my notes:

Chapter 7

8:42 -> "And I think it a reasonable guess"
the word "is" is added between "it" and "a"

17:09 -> "nine-tenths certainty deducible from what"
deductible is said instead of deducible

25:14 -> There is a section at the top of page 80 that is skipped over, I believe it should be placed in between the note and the contents at the top of page 81.

I hope I can keep up,
ELDN

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Post by ELDN » January 31st, 2021, 7:35 pm

I have PLed chapter 8 and it is OK!

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Post by johng » February 2nd, 2021, 10:02 am

I've corrected section 7

Thanks for catching that missing sentence!! somewhat confusing to follow, sometimes!!
"Morality" is doing what's right regardless of what you're told!
"Obedience" is doing what is told, regardless of what is right!

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