
saucy indeed and very mischievous. I already pity Sir William Mode, he won't stand a chance against this assault of plotting against him.
Excellently acted, Val, I loved the little "know-it-all"-chuckles you put in on occasion.

Highly entertaining, and looking forward to the rest of the play.
A few small notes to correct however:
>
at 0:04: "
act 1": you can
cut this part, this is the narrator recording it. It won't be included in your voice credit
>
at 1:18: (p. 73) "one in the head of innumerable
fopperies and insolences attacks me" – you say "
sopperies", here actually it looks like an F and also
is an F
>
at 3:19: (p. 74) "no I must have some con
trivance to expose him" – you say "con
science"
>
at 4:12: "
end of act 1" –
can also be cut, will be the narrator's job
thanks
Sonia