dckabir wrote: ↑February 7th, 2023, 12:54 am
yes I wandered into dramatic works and its a great forum! Really enjoying voicing various characters
hehe, I totally agree. And you're a great addition to our crazy gang.
yes she does, you characterize her very well. It's difficult to decide whether to dislike or to pity her.
Only a few small things to edit:
> at about 5:43
: (p. 61) please insert: "Aye.
> at 9:08
: (p. 89) between "Ah" and "for thee Simon" – could you please leave more silent space
here for the stage directions in beween ?
> from 9:42 to 9:44
: (p. 89) between "at my heart" and "I knew not" – here it's the same speech, so you can cut the long silence
> at 10:21
: (p. 90) between "from thy side" and "list" – again, more silent space needed
for the editor to work with. Each time there are stage directions inside your speech
, you need to treat it as separate quotes and insert the space