[COMPLETE] Battle-Pieces by Herman Melville -jo

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alanmapstone wrote: April 10th, 2024, 9:37 am
VOvortex12 wrote: April 9th, 2024, 11:28 am Hello
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_33_melville_128kb.mp3
Here is section 33
Time 1:35
PL notes for section 33:
the text is mostly correct and your recording passes Checker :thumbs:
but a few minor corrections are needed:
at 0.00 the opening silence should be 0.5 to 1 second
at 0.08 say Read for Librivox.org
at 1.16 the text is Well may we think but hear Well we may think
at 1.23 say End of poem rather than the title
Hello

Here is section 33 with requested revisions
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_33_melville_128kb.mp3

File duration 1:24
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VOvortex12 wrote: April 11th, 2024, 10:58 am
Here is section 32 with the requested revisions.
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_32_melville_128kb.mp3
Section 32 is now PL OK! :thumbs:
Congratulations on your first completed section :wink:
Alan
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VOvortex12 wrote: April 11th, 2024, 11:01 am Here is section 33 with requested revisions
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_33_melville_128kb.mp3
File duration 1:24
Section 33 is now also PL OK! :thumbs:
Well Done!
Alan
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alanmapstone wrote: April 12th, 2024, 9:30 am
VOvortex12 wrote: April 11th, 2024, 10:58 am
Here is section 32 with the requested revisions.
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_32_melville_128kb.mp3
Section 32 is now PL OK! :thumbs:
Congratulations on your first completed section :wink:
Thank you Alan!!
:D :D
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alanmapstone wrote: April 12th, 2024, 9:32 am
VOvortex12 wrote: April 11th, 2024, 11:01 am Here is section 33 with requested revisions
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_33_melville_128kb.mp3
File duration 1:24
Section 33 is now also PL OK! :thumbs:
Well Done!
Thank you! Thank you!
:D :D
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Section 43 is PL OK

~ Larry

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silverquill wrote: April 12th, 2024, 12:56 pm Section 43 is PL OK
Thanks Larry
I have section 56 recorded but it is a long one so editing will take some time.
This project is getting close to completion.
Alan
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alanmapstone wrote: April 8th, 2024, 8:49 am
BobbyBreadshower wrote: April 7th, 2024, 11:46 am Here is section 51. Please let me know if I need to make any changes.
2:54
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_51_melville_128kb.mp3
Hi
Thank you for your recording :wink:
It is well read and passes all the technical spec checks
Just a couple of PL notes on the text:
at 0.04 say Read for Librivox.org you left off the .org
at 0.39 the text is That culture which makes never wan but you pronounce wan as wain when it should be w-aa-n (meaning pale and lifeless)
otherwise ok!

I have now also assigned you section 52 which you also requested.
See below for the updated recording for section 51. Hopefully this one is all good!

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_51_melville_128kb.mp3

Thank you for section 52 as well, I'll get started on that one now.
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BobbyBreadshower wrote: April 13th, 2024, 12:17 pm See below for the updated recording for section 51. Hopefully this one is all good!
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_51_melville_128kb.mp3
Section 51 is now PL OK! :thumbs:
Well Done!
Alan
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I'm Afraid of Americans - David Bowie
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PL OK! :thumbs:
Very well and clearly read!
Thank you
Alan
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Section 56 is Ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_56_melville_128kb.mp3
15.16

This is a long one :roll:
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alanmapstone wrote: April 21st, 2024, 12:15 pm Section 56 is Ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_56_melville_128kb.mp3
15.16

This is a long one :roll:
Glad to report this as PL OK
Good reading, Alan. :thumbs:

~ Larry

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Some stats: 2,300 projects, 335 as BC, 500 as DPL, 1850 as reader.
More to come :D
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silverquill wrote: April 22nd, 2024, 12:23 am
alanmapstone wrote: April 21st, 2024, 12:15 pm Section 56 is Ready for PL!
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_56_melville_128kb.mp3
15.16
This is a long one
Glad to report this as PL OK
Good reading, Alan.
Thanks Larry, you have been a great help on this project.😺
Only 4 sections to go 🤞
Alan
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Post by Heather6542 »

Hi all,
Section 47 is ready for PL. 1:17

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_47_melville_128kb.mp3

Please let me know if any changes need to be made,

Thank you,
Heather
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